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Great atmosphere & great character design! Love it.

I did a quick look through of your gallery & your stuff is very interesting. I like how clean everything is, I'm a stickler for neat & tidy. But if you don't mind me laying some crits on you - I've noticed you have a good eye for posing, very sexy. But The number one thing that sticks out to me, that can hurt these poses & a finished piece is lack of thrust. In figure drawing, a thrust is considered the movement, emotion & base of any pose. The thrust really consists of the head, ribcage & pelvis. If you look at any book by Victor Perard, he demonstrates all different forms of figure drawing. I suggest studying his exercises & even doing some yourself! It will really add some movement into your figures. In my personal opinion, a more dramatic figure, is a sexier one.

With that noted, it's always FANTASTIC to play up on dramatics! Coloring, shading, lighting, line boldness, composition, etc. So what if you can draw the figure getting penetrated? Yes, it's sexy. But let's push it further & really captivate our audience, make their spine tingle & eyes scan every inch of your drawing. That's not to say that every drawing has to be dark & moody lit by candlelight, etc. But you have some great opportunities to try things! Take this piece for instance; perhaps you can go back into the lineart & try colouring it again, for practice of course - & this time imagine the light coming from the bottom of the picture. Really THINK about the 'shapes of shadows' - what abstract shapes can you add into the shadows? This will make your piece carry further. Play with colours as well! This is a very cool colored pallete you've chosen, try adding some warm colours to not only add contrast, but 'heat it up'.

I could yank on you about anatomy, but it really just takes practice - if you look at Perard's work as I had mentioned & practice. You'll be surprised how much you pick up when you attempt to draw again. It's all about having a good eye. If you're really interested in anatomy however, I suggest picking up a copy of Richer's Artistic Anatomy. He explains the entire body wonderfully. If you're more of a visual learner, I suggest looking at any book by Burt Hogarth (Dynamic Anatomy is a good one.)

I guess all I can really stress is just practice, you have potential & a good eye for sexy. Keep at it! (:

SileNt-Sam responds:

thank you VERY much I really appreciate it :')
i'm practicing every day to be batter and i REALLY want to be a pro artist , but i keep get a lot of hateful messages about my art :( but i don't care about them , and yeah i agree with you i really enjoy making my art it's the way i Express my feelings , about the shadows and the shading i know it's not that good but i'm getting batter every time i draw , thank you again you really gave me a hope :)

I'd like to feel that tongue in my pussy. Hot stuff, I like the colors, doll. x

I dig x

I like your pen work here.
Sketchy, but not to the point where you can't tell what anything is. x
Good job!
Hope to see more.

-Thumbs x

afiboy69 responds:

hey thanks =D for this comment it rlly helps if ur interested im on deviant art http://popphoto2.deviantart.com/
Btw i rlly like ur art work =)

Tasty

Hey man, I really love the style on this one. So abstract & original.
I've seen lots of popart but this is like, you're own style added to another.
Keeping it original is always win. I love the face.
Super cute (: The colors are also delicious.
I might have added some more dramatic shadowing maybe, like purples or blues.
But what you did is still awesome pie.
(:

Radical.

OnionsXD responds:

Really? I got my own popartish style?! That's awesome!! I guess that's like the best thing to hear right?I'll defnitely be making more popart style pictures some even on real paper as well! :D thanks for the awesome review! :P

Awh!

I love this, It looks just like them!
Which I like, because you drew them in your own style, yet still managed to portray their characters.
It's very hard to do that, & lots of people fail at it. You did not!
I love Ringo's shirt by the way..Yellow Submarine <3
haha

EdpR responds:

Thank you!
I was kinda worried because it was a bit hard for me to portray George and Paul, but now that you say that, I feel relieved.
I love his yellow submarine's outfit too ;)

Hello Derick Dumphy!

My dick is just fine thanks.
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I really like this, it's simple & cute!
I love the dotted line of where his other horn should have finished.
Kind of reminds me of where the wild things are.
Keep up the great work!
x

hmm

I like your lineart. Nice & clean, just the way I like it (;
She's very pretty, & you've got the idea for shading Down nicely.
But I would avoid using the plain brushes on fuzzy. Like it looks fine, but it lacks any form of texture making the image look flat. Try using different tones & the water color brush..4th row in your brush panel to the very left. (by right clicking) If you don't have a tablet, use the regular brush but turn the opacity down to like 75..it wont be exactly the same, but it'll help more. Shading isn't just one color, & neither is skin. The bigger the area the darker the shadow etc. Like around the neck I would've made it dark then gradually get lighter.

For blood, bruises & wounds too. I mean what you've done is cute, but a bruise isn't just purple! They're blue, gray, purple, green & even yellow! I suggest giving them more depth, like shading! She'd probably be all crusty or slimy, coated with dirt & blood. I want to see that!

I mean this is really cute, but that's all..cute. Which I don't think you want..Anatomically it's very accurate, but nipples would be nice, as the other guy said. There's NOTHING wrong with nipples, we all have them & so do you. Don't be afraid to draw them! The body is art! Don't be modest. I know drawing nipples is hard, & I'm sure they didn't seem right, but some nipps are better than non. I suggest looking at your own. It would've brought this picture to a whole new level! Also, hear breasts should be falling downward like her hair. Which again, would have looked awkward, but breasts don't float & stay in one position all the time (I wish) Theyre big water balloons with weight! Haha

I like the hair, a lot, The dark blue really contrasts well with her skin tone, but it's shading again, try shading in more strands & such, use different colors. A dark green would shade great with that! I mean it's all preference, but think about it.

Anyways, all in all It's a cute a piece. You have lots of potential. Keep working, you'll be great! (:

Sorrygirl99 responds:

aww! Thanks!

You know what, i think that i am going to draw another version of this and follow all of the stuff that you just gave me ;3
i'll also draw nipples! so dont you fret c:

thanks for all the tips~ It means so much to me that some would take their time in typing up all this stuff for me to read :D

cutie

Awh, what a cutie xx
I like the skin, very smooth.
x

amyrenee responds:

Thank you very much!!! :D

well

Well I like his nose. It looks fine to me, just a lil rounded up (;
Not pretty, but very cute.
I like the warm feel & the facial expression is very cute!
Keep it up! x

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